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03 November 2008 @ 08:19 pm
[writing] poetry of crack  
I have committed poetry! For karenhealey and revena! Because I am on crack!



Elliptical Eclipse
for Karen and Robyn

My love is like
a series of ellipses…
it trails off
under … the shadow
of the planet
blocking…
the…
sun…
an eclipse.

My love…removes
words from quotations
and is literally
ironically
the very definition of
kicking ass.
 
 
Current Mood: gigglygiggly
Current Music: full house
 
 
 
Robyn Fleming: OoaK OMG YAY!revena on November 4th, 2008 01:26 am (UTC)
I heart you so hard, man.
Carla M. Leecarlamlee on November 4th, 2008 01:28 am (UTC)
I heart you so hard too.

chocolate in the fruit bowl: inspired (bubblegumtrade)karenhealey on November 4th, 2008 01:28 am (UTC)
OH MY GOD. MINE EYEN.
Carla M. Leecarlamlee on November 4th, 2008 01:29 am (UTC)
MY WORK HERE...IS DONE!
chocolate in the fruit bowlkarenhealey on November 4th, 2008 01:31 am (UTC)
Oh, dramatic pause ellipses are bearable!

IT'S TRAILING OFF ELLIPSES THAT ARE LETTER POOP.
Carla M. Leecarlamlee on November 4th, 2008 01:33 am (UTC)
FINE!

MY WORK HERE IS DONE...
AGAIN...
DON'T YOU THINK...?

I now have the desire to strike a dramatic pause pose.